Inside Writing Communities, Grades 3-5
Conversations Among Writing Peers
How can peer conferencing help students in grades 3-5 become better writers? In this workshop, you will examine the various forms peer response might take in a writing workshop, the importance of an authentic audience for written work, and how peer conferencing can enhance writing skills in grades 3-5. You will also explore teaching strategies for structuring peer conferences and helping students respond to each other appropriately and meaningfully.
What students value even more than the teacher’s perspective on their writing is their peer’s.
— Jack Wilde, retired teacher and author of A Door Opens: Writing in Fifth Grade
In this workshop you will explore how to:
- provide models, structures, and guidelines for peer conferences
- help students give constructive feedback to one another during peer conferences
- enhance writing skills through peer conferencing and communication
Prepare for the Workshop
To prepare for this workshop, you will examine strategies you already use and read an article about peer conferencing.
What Do You Do?
Karen Smith, one of the experts featured in “Conversations Among Writing Peers,” says that it is validating for student writers to have peers “listen with all their heart and soul.”
Think about a time that another person — a peer or perhaps a teacher — read and evaluated your writing. Answer the following questions, jotting down your answers in your notebook:
- How did you feel about the experience?
- What, if anything, did the other person do that validated you as a writer?
- Did it seem to you that this person was really “listening” to you? Why or why not?
- What have you observed among student writers that might support Karen’s idea that it is validating for students to have their peers listen to them?
- How would you correlate this validation with students becoming better writers?
Think about your teaching practice, specifically about ways in which you provide opportunities for students to read their written work aloud, receive feedback, and make revisions based on peer responses. Then answer the following questions, jotting down your answers in your notebook:
- Describe a lesson or practice you use when students either work together with a peer on a writing assignment or read their written work aloud and receive feedback.
- What are benefits and challenges of peer responses?
- What questions do you have about peer conferencing and response?
Examine the Literature
Print out the Examine the Literature Response Chart (PDF). Then read the article listed below, recording your ideas on the chart during and after reading. When you have finished, save your chart to submit as an assignment.
Peer Conferences: Strategies and Consequences (PDF)
This article examines the benefits of peer conferences and one educator’s approach to teaching students to become effective peer conference partners.
Wilde, Jack. “Peer Conferences: Strategies and Consequences.” This article was commissioned specifically for “Inside Writing Communities, Grades 3-5,” 2007.
Analyze the Videos
Key Practices To Observe
“Conversations Among Writing Peers” and “Peer Conferences” explore how teachers help students become effective conference partners for their peers. They feature commentary from experts on teaching writing at the elementary level, as well as classroom illustrations highlighting the practices of several teachers.
As you watch, look for the following key practices:
- Teachers model meaningful conference structures that students can follow and adapt.
- The “fishbowl” demonstration allows students to see peer conferences in action.
- Teachers give students time to practice peer conferences.
- Teachers communicate reasonable expectations and recognize that conferring skills develop and improve over time.
- Peer conferences help students develop critical listening skills.
- Student writers receive sincere compliments and respectful feedback from their peers without relinquishing control over writing choices.
- Teachers quietly listen to student writing conversations and use these opportunities to assess progress.
- Teachers sometimes coach students during peer conferences, keeping their focus on strategies that help students improve their writing skills.
- During peer conferences, students refer to specific writing strategies taught and modeled in a writing workshop. Classroom charts or other visual reminders of writing strategies help facilitate their conversations.
Examine Your Practice
The teachers and experts appearing in “Conversations Among Writing Peers” have found that even young students can respond helpfully to each other’s writing when they are provided clear expectations and support, especially in their first attempts at conferencing. Read the following quote, consider your own students, and answer the questions below.
I think you get different results in peer conferences, depending upon whether you structure the response or not. Just as with anything else, some kind of structure is helpful, especially in the beginning, with students who are just learning how to respond.
The structure in peer conferencing can act like training wheels. The first thing it can do, just as training wheels do, is make it safe. It makes it safe for the writer to share if he or she knows that the first response is going to be a positive response, and then that there are going to be questions, and then they are going to have an opportunity to ask questions. But I would view it as exactly that — as a type of training wheels. And when you feel that students get it, that they feel safe in the conferencing and they feel good about the kind of feedback they’re getting and they’re able to receive it, then you can remove the training wheels.
And once the training wheels are removed, the structure of the conferences can be negotiated based on what the writer feels he or she needs to hear to take the next steps with a paper and what the students listening to the writing feel is important.
— Jack Wilde
Reflect on the excerpt from Jack Wilde and consider your own students. Then write your answers to the questions below in your notebook. If you are working in a group, share your responses.
- What are your expectations for peer conferences?
- As student writers become more confident using a prescriptive strategy for peer conferencing, how can you help them learn to seek responses from their peers more spontaneously and independently?
- How do you measure whether or not a peer conference has been successful?
- Do all students necessarily move forward at the same rate, and if not, how do you negotiate that some students may be ready and able to work spontaneously and independently while others still need additional scaffolding or skill-building?
Try an Activity
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Assess a Peer Conference
In this interactive, you will watch a video of two authentic peer conferences. As you watch, consider these questions:
- What are the benefits of the conferences to the writer and to the responders?
- Where in the conferences do you see evidence of the teacher’s explicit instruction?
- What do you observe in the writer’s demeanor as she receives feedback on her piece?
- How helpful do you think the conferences are to the writer?
After recording your responses, you can compare your evaluation of the conferences to another teacher’s.
Put It Into Practice
The videos, activities, and readings in this workshop illustrate effective practices for helping students respond to one another as writers. Now apply what you have learned to modify or develop your own peer conference protocol.
Create a Lesson Plan
Create a lesson plan introducing a peer conferencing strategy to your students. Use one of the strategies featured in the workshop, or you can modify one of the strategies. Be sure to include the following:
- how you will introduce peer conferencing
- strategies for grouping peers
- specific guidelines and structure for conferences
- how you will assess the lesson and strategy you implemented
After experimenting with the strategy in your classroom, describe what worked and what didn’t work, any changes you would make to the strategy or to teaching the strategy to your students, and whether or not you plan to use the strategy again.
Reflect on Your Learning
What Did You Learn?
Summarize what you have learned about peer conferencing from the experts’ statements, classroom examples, and the readings and activities in this workshop. Use the questions below to guide your thinking. When you have finished, save your written summary to submit as an assignment.
- Which classroom practices from the videos reflect what you currently do?
- Which practices or ideas are new to you?
- What changes do you plan to make?
- What support and/or resources will you need to implement these ideas?
National Council of Teachers of English
NCTE provides research, teaching resources, and articles for teaching writing at all levels.
Calkins, Lucy McCormick. The Art of Teaching Writing. Rev. ed. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1994. ISBN: 0435088092
This classic addresses every aspect of the writing workshop, including topic choice; teacher conferences; peer response; writing across the curriculum; and revision, editing, and publication.
Calkins, Lucy McCormick. Lessons From a Child. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1983. ISBN: 043508206X
A long section on peer conferencing and response in the writing classroom is included in this book.
Graves, Donald. Writing: Teachers and Children at Work. Twentieth-Anniversary Edition. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2003. ISBN: 0325005257
One of the seminal works in writing instruction, this inspirational text includes the “Receiving the Piece” protocol.
Morgan, Bruce, and Deb Odom. Writing Through the Tween Years: Supporting Writers, Grades 3-6. Portland, ME: Stenhouse Publishers, 2004. ISBN: 1571104062
This case study explores how the authors (both teachers at the same school) returned to their roots as writing workshop teachers and re-inspired their students to write.
Wilde, Jack. A Door Opens: Writing in the Fifth Grade. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1993. ISBN: 0435087614
This book examines the author’s teaching practices and includes many examples of student writing in a variety of genres.
Karen Smith, Ph.D.
Karen is currently an associate professor in the education department of Arizona State University. She spent 20 years as a teacher in a multilingual, combined fifth- and sixth-grade classroom. Prior to her position at ASU, she served as Associate Executive Director at the National Council of Teachers of English. She has written numerous articles and a book chapter, “Enhancing the Literature Experience Through Deep Discussions of Character,” from What a Character, published by the International Reading Association.
Jack retired in 2005 after more than 35 years teaching first through fifth grade, most recently in Hanover, New Hampshire. He has two master’s degrees: a master’s of arts in liberal studies from Dartmouth College with a concentration in math and science, and a master’s in education from the University of Toronto. Jack has been a workshop presenter and college-level writing instructor at various institutions including the University of New Hampshire. He is author of A Door Opens: Writing in Fifth Grade.
Jeanne Boiarsky, Ph.D.
Zaharis Elementary, Mesa, Arizona
Jeanne is currently in her 16th year as a teacher. In addition to third grade, Jeanne also has taught at the first- and second-grade levels. Dr. Boiarsky received her bachelor’s and master’s degrees in elementary education from Arizona State University, graduating cum laude. She received her Ph.D. in elementary education from Lacrosse University in Mississippi.
About the School:
Located in the suburbs of Phoenix, Zaharis Elementary’s student population of 780 is predominantly Caucasian (83 percent). Virtually everyone at the school — students, teachers, administrators, and support staff — keeps a writer’s notebook.
Danville Elementary, Danville, New Hampshire
Lindsay Dibert has been teaching fifth grade for the past six years. She has served on technology and distance learning teams for the Timberlane Regional School District. Lindsay earned her bachelor’s degree in elementary education from Bowling Green State University in Ohio and her M.S.T.E. from the University of New Hampshire.
About the School:
Danville is a small town in southern New Hampshire, and Danville Elementary is one of five elementary schools in the Timberlane Regional school district. The school enrollment is nearly 400, and 96 percent are Caucasian.
Herrera School for the Fine Arts, Phoenix, Arizona
A 22-year teaching veteran, Silvia Edgerton has worked with students ranging in age from 6 to 14. She received her bachelor’s degree from Arizona State University. A second language learner herself, Silvia leads reading and writing workshops for parents of Herrera School students.
About the School:
Located in the urban core of Phoenix and among the poorest districts in the nation, Herrera is a fine arts magnet school with a comprehensive arts curriculum. Predominantly Hispanic (93 percent), 44 percent of the students are second language learners. The school has a two-way bilingual immersion program in which non-Spanish-speaking students are learning Spanish and native Spanish speakers are learning English.
6.1 Program 11: Conversations Among Peer Writers
One way to provide an authentic audience for young writers is to have them share their work with each other. This program shows how teachers help students respond to their peers by modeling appropriate behavior and teaching protocols for student responses.
6.2 Program 12: Peer Conferences
Third-grade teacher Jeanne Boiarsky teaches a peer conference protocol to her class and Lindsay Dibert's fifth-grade class uses a different peer conference strategy in revising personal narratives.
Supplementary: Peer Conferences: Strategies and Consequences
Peer Conferences: Strategies and Consequences